This was my first attempt at a themed puzzle. I finished my previous job in June 2022 and my new (self-employed) career was starting slowly, so I had some spare time and decided to have a go.
Soon after I started solving the Listener in 1993 I encountered a memorable puzzle called ‘Not Quite Tied Test’ by Phil Brindall (no. 3216) in which the clues were cricket-themed. These days golf is the sport I’m most passionate about (or, more accurately, obsessed with), hence the golf-themed puzzle. When I noticed that GENE SARAZEN and ANCIENT MARINER had a few letters in common as well as the albatross connection, that gave me the main gimmick.
I needed a few more thematic pieces. Once I started thinking about the Ancient Mariner, the line ‘And he stoppeth one of three’ seemed useful. (I’m not sure who first used this line to describe a substandard wicketkeeper, but it’s been part of cricket lore for a while.) And the other reference to an albatross that jumped to mind was the Monty Python sketch.
All the thematic elements seemed to suggest themselves quite quickly, but I came down to earth with a bump when it came to fitting them into a grid. After dozens of abortive attempts, moving them round the grid, changing orientation, re-barring etc, I eventually had a filled grid and was able to start writing clues. This part was really enjoyable. I sent the puzzle off to Filbert who kindly agreed to test solve.
This revealed one major problem: my answer lengths were much too short. There was no alternative but to improve the grid and re-fill. I had to remove the grid’s symmetry but found an alternative that seemed to meet the average word length requirement. Most of the original clues had to go, including references to (among others) Bobby Jones, Sandy Lyle, Angel Cabrera, Craig Stadler, Nick Faldo, Ben Hogan, Hideki Matsuyama, Billy Casper, Patrick Reed, Fuzzy Zoeller, Adam Scott, Arnold Palmer, Horton Smith and Greg Norman. But I was happy enough with the new set of clues.
I sent the puzzle off to Shane, only to find the average answer length was still a bit too short – I had made the mistake of rounding to one decimal place! But I was able to fix this with relatively minor changes to the grid and a few new clues. It was great to receive the email from Shane accepting the puzzle. There was already a puzzle scheduled for Masters Saturday in 2023 so we decided to hold it over until 2024.
When I received the edited puzzle for proof-reading, it was clear my original clues were rather on the long side. However, Shane and Roger had come up with some excellent concise alternatives including new references to Jon Rahm and Byron Nelson.
I learned a lot from this process, in particular to be patient when constructing a grid, to nail down the grid before writing the clues and to keep the clues concise.
Thanks to my test solver Filbert, to Shane and Roger, and to John Green for his sterling work.